This section of the book took me the longest to write. There was rhythm to the fights that I needed to respect. I knew I couldn’t hit you over the head with them. That is why the last three fights Josiah doesn’t watch Tommy kill the fighters. I did that mainly for the audience. this is a love story after all. Believe it or not I took out a lot more gore to appeal to a more female friendly audience. The fights exhausted me to write.
I want to know is….
1. Were they over the top?
2. Could you feel what Tommy was going through?
3. How bad did you hate Romero?
4. Did Tommy vindicate himself?